New comic. Afraid drawing-wise I feel it’s already outdated, as I kept this under work for a while now, and it is really not up to my current standards anymore. I was also trying a quicker style with this, with mixed results. Anyway, expect page 2 to look different.
Like the comic. Is it possible we could get next/previous links?
I think you could have organized the exposition better. I would read up to a panel, then go back and try to figure out where I had clearly missed something. I shouldn't feel like there must have been something I didn't see unless I actually missed something.
I admit I feel like I could have done this page better in hindsight... hopefully I have improved in further pages tho.